Nature can be flawless…

Not a word was spoken,

it was as if a spell had been broken,

the clouds in the sky would meet,

and the air seemed fragrant,

hot and sweet,

and moving at its own pace,

flawless,

and sliding soundlessly into place,

shadows nestled on the currents of warm air,

some were cradled there,

with shared compassion

and blinding passion,

treating beauty like a treasure,

and the very sound of that word

brought a rush of pleasure,

almost like a breeze,

and as powerful as the majestic trees,

flawless,

like the flight of the honey bees.

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Comments (11)
  • s j tubrazy on Jul 5, 2011

    VERY NICE

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 8, 2011

    Frank, that is perfectly beautiful. Spring in motion.

  • LadyElena on Jul 17, 2011

    Lovely Poem. I dont like bees but the one in the photo looks cute. lol

  • Dennis N OBrien on Jul 27, 2011

    Yes this is good – well done.

  • yes me on Jul 27, 2011

    liked it lots Frank cheers

  • Tomas on Aug 5, 2011

    Wow flawless indeed friend

  • Parker212 on Aug 8, 2011

    This was truly flawless :)

  • Sammy2000 on Jan 28, 2012

    wow I missed your work this was very good

  • Atanacio on Feb 20, 2012

    thanks guys for reading my flawless

  • Crazyeights on Mar 31, 2012

    what a very nice poem

  • Thomas on May 24, 2012

    what can I say…flawless… :)

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