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Float with Me

Margaret Alden on Nov 2, 2009
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Erotic destiny.

You are the very essence of me.

Can I slip under your skin?

Can you penetrate my flower permanently?

-with intensity?

Can you stroke my heart?

-with fingers dipped in love?

Float with me lover deep.

Love me crazy.

Love deep.

Image via Wikipedia

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  • Dr.Elayaraja on Nov 2, 2009

    Sweet poem…

    Much sweeter is the photograph….

    Kudos…

  • drelayaraja on Nov 2, 2009

    I would like to know the name of the flower in the photograph you have posted..

    It looks like an orchid…

    Please let me know..

  • giftarist on Nov 2, 2009

    Lovely and beautiful piece..Great work!

  • Judi Eddy on Nov 2, 2009

    Really erotic poem. enjoyable

  • Darrell W Penner on Nov 2, 2009

    Hello Dr Elayaraja, it is a “Bee Orchid” Ophrys apifera http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bee_Orchid I helped Margaret pick out the picture.

    It is a very sensual poem. Margaret has a talent with these poems.

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