Fluid Love

Michael Degenhardt on Sep 17, 2009

Two lovers, acting out their love on the beach, day through night.

Together, the two share the sea

The sand, the surf, the sunset spray

Within embrace, so happily

They seek out pleasures night and day

As nighttime moon ignites the sky

And daylight sun retreats for sleep

Their time alone goes slowly by

Within their arms, they hold to keep

As soon, all time will then, still, be

Their dreams unite, to culminate

Alive, as one, sharing their sea

Strong feelings thrive,perpetuate

This moment now is theirs to know

And with the sea, their love now flows

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Darla Cooke on Sep 17, 2009
This is a lovely poem.
Goodselfme on Sep 17, 2009
Great deep piece giving much pleasure when reading.
Will Gray on Sep 17, 2009
Beautiful, peaceful and romantic!
ken bultman on Sep 17, 2009
That was nice. There’s something in the saltwater.
teddybear55 on Sep 17, 2009
I have had such thoughts of beaches in Hawaii, the sand, the waves, the love between two lovers shared…lovely poem.
Melody SJAL on Sep 17, 2009
I love its tone, style and flow. Excellent!
Tanya Wallace on Sep 18, 2009
Beautiful poetic words from a wonderful poet!A very romantic poem, one that is pleasing to read!
viveresperando on Apr 8, 2011
this was a beautiful write!

Hi there!