A haiku of playing about being on the swing set.

I swing in the air

My heart and belly jump up

Flying in the sky.

Image via Wikipedia

Other Haiku by me:

http://authspot.com/poetry/halloween-haiku-3/

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  • margaridab on Nov 9, 2010

    I miss a good swing :)

  • webseowriters on Nov 9, 2010

    Thanks for sharing

  • Ukrainian on Nov 9, 2010

    Lovely haiku.

  • giftarist on Nov 9, 2010

    Lovely.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Nov 9, 2010

    fun I remember those days in child when it was ever so easy to escape into the dream.

  • PSingh1990 on Nov 9, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Nov 9, 2010

    i really enjoyed this haiku very much, in just 3 verses, it captured the thrill and joy of flying. thanks very much for creating and sharing, Annie.

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 10, 2010

    PERFECT photo to accompany this simple and beautiful haiku.

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