This is a little poem I wrote on my feelings towards flying. Enjoy!

It is my desire

Like a hot coal in the day

Always live wire

nothing can take it away

 

To feel light

and to see

the sight

around me

 

Around me is a bubble

Though that’s not what I awe

Neither is my reflected double

But it was outside I saw

 

The poof and floof

Of large white clouds another

They act like a goof

Stumbling and thrashing at each other

 

Not just gaining my awe

But striping my awe

But holding my awe

But devouring my awe

 

This is power of flying

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  • KristenKreashko on Oct 12, 2009

    Good job!

  • chantell on Oct 15, 2009

    Nice poem

  • Liz Sapphire on Oct 16, 2009

    Very nice poem, full of expression. Thanks for sharing =)

  • diamondpoet on Oct 25, 2009

    What imagination and love the play on words.

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Nov 13, 2009

    Careful there with your dreams and aspirations…I sometimes think its safer to be poor because the wealty has access to those toys such as airplanes(especially those built as a hobby) and they take them up only to crash!

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