Time dream come true.

cutting trees
search string
cutting and sawing
make aircraft
with a hot air balloon
reaching dreams

I will fly
around the earth
held sky
flying with birds
saw people from a distance

I have a dream
you have a dream
They have a dream
all have a dream

I wait
I’ll finish this plane
we’ll fly
together in a small cabin
looked beautiful world

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Comments (23)
  • Jimmy Shilaho on Feb 23, 2010

    Nice little poem, keep it up Biantoro.

  • chellsy on Feb 23, 2010

    great article

  • sureshkumaras on Feb 23, 2010

    Nice

  • biantoro on Feb 24, 2010

    thanks all

  • Inna Tysoe on Feb 24, 2010

    Thanks for that

  • albert1jemi on Feb 24, 2010

    thanks for writtin such a nice poem

  • Lord Banks on Feb 24, 2010

    Fun packed short poem good stuff! LB

  • singming12 on Feb 24, 2010

    very touching

  • Eunice Tan on Feb 24, 2010

    Very well written.

  • 8Shei8 on Feb 24, 2010

    This is simply nice and original! I like this a lot!

  • justmyname on Feb 25, 2010

    very nice mas biantoro, inspiring poem :D

  • sambhafusia on Feb 25, 2010

    excellent share…thought provoked greatly.thanks for sharing….

  • malinikadhir on Feb 25, 2010

    thoughts got caught!….inspiring!

  • henners200 on Feb 25, 2010

    great share :)

  • henners200 on Feb 25, 2010

    great share

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Feb 26, 2010

    great positive poem

  • AlmaG on Feb 26, 2010

    Excellent poem!

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 27, 2010

    Very Nice one…

  • pen2010 on Feb 28, 2010

    good post

  • yes me on Mar 3, 2010

    Nice one Biantoro

  • Kakraba Afful on Mar 8, 2010

    excellent rhythm

  • landungutut on Mar 16, 2010

    good well written poem,n very touchy too…

  • joyhyena29 on Mar 19, 2010

    great share^^

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