For Duffs writing challenge #10.

There are somethings which are best unknown by family members.

Feelings are alive between us,
Our very being in existence,
Reminding us of the days,
Binding us closer for always,
In between our moments,
Dancing away until the Moon sets,
Drawing us together,
Even through the toughest weather,
Never are we alone,

Loving as we grow,
Over and over again,
Valuing each and every moment,
Each and every thing is not enough,

& the feeling of Forbidden Love,

Fortune favours the prepared mind,
Anger derails the feelings inside,
Making them curse what they don’t know,
Instead of seeing at a different view,
Loving the man of my dreams,
Yes, it’s hard to discuss such things with ones Family.

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Comments (12)
  • cutedrishti8 on Sep 9, 2009

    nice one to read.. great work….

  • Darla Cooke on Sep 9, 2009

    Great poem for the challenge!

  • lillyrose on Sep 10, 2009

    I thought this was beautifully written and passionate, blended with much sadness x

  • hfj on Sep 14, 2009

    Nice poem for the challenge. Good flow and structure. Well done.

  • oldster on Sep 14, 2009

    Well done Pooch.
    Good poem.

  • Used to be Shelly on Sep 14, 2009

    Good work.

  • DulceCorazon on Sep 14, 2009

    Sad. But I love it.

  • Rod Ferrandino on Sep 15, 2009

    Within the box you create another box, and you meet the additional challenge; very good.

  • Duff D Moss on Sep 15, 2009

    Never before has the challenge had an acrostic, and this round we have TWO. Great minds must think alike :-)

    Nice piece, and thanks very much for playing. Hope you have a crack at the next round too.

  • I Have Had Enough on Sep 16, 2009

    Good job.

  • Brenda Nelson on Sep 16, 2009

    nice poem, kind of sad and touching.

  • Marie Milton on Sep 17, 2009

    A great one for the for the challenge Pooch. Love it!!!

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