Fog

Kimberly Lee on Oct 30, 2008

Tags: cloudy, dense, fog, Life, lost, love

For all the times when I just feel lost.

The fog rolled in
I couldn’t find your face
Lost in the fog
Like I’m lost in my head
Faceless souls
Screaming all around me
Soulless eyes
Haunting memories inside me
Density impenetrable
Moisture undetectable
In my state of mind
Numb with fluid
Unaware of myself
Clouds of nothingness
Settling down
Thoughts of emptiness
Ready to drown
Choking on my thoughts
Not even spoken
Gasping for air
While breathing
Spinning circles in my head
Only to find
You standing above me
Somehow I’ve fallen
Somewhere I’m here
Or there
But I don’t know where

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Michael Degenhardt on Oct 30, 2008
The fog can certainly put us all out of sorts, make us lose our place each day. It being a state of mind, you conveyed that sentiment clearly and very well. Michael
larcha 51 on Nov 1, 2008
Wonderful!
Peter Cimino on Nov 4, 2008
Gut wrenching poem! Nicely done.
gabbic1219 on Nov 7, 2008
ooo how i kno this feeling all to well,but i have a new poem called IM ON MY WAY …it describes making a change/it is never easy but better days r comming i tell myself,you wrote this so clear,anyone feeling down at times can truly feel ur write!

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