The aftermath of an angry winter storm can sometimes be a beautiful thing.

    Anger is a freezing rain
that turns a night to hail,
    rage, a whipping sleet, disdain,
a distant banshee’s wail.
And after such distilling pains,
their loss, like fingernails,
    tears the mind,    tears the will
    drains the eyes of all their chill.

    After the icy wind maligns
the fragile, shaking eaves,
and sheets of snow-glass form designs
on shingles, stones and leaves,
    layered morning comes benign,
its color starts to weave
a deeper shade,    a deeper mood
a deepness where the dolors brood.

    After brutal night recedes,
a brittle, frozen waste
remains, and low, frail, ice accedes
the warmth of day as chaste.
A melting then does supercede,
as anger to disgrace
    breaks the heart,    breaks the pall;
    a thousand broken crystals fall.

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  • Adam Henry Sears on Mar 18, 2009

    Hi, Stick, how are you?
    I love the closing lines of these stanzas, very brooding, very introspective. This is a unique POV and some good imagery.
    Shouldn’t colour and dolours be spelled with u.s? Oh, that’s right, you’re probably American, sorry, I’m Canadian.
    Other than that, great job. Thanks for sharing.

  • Brent on Mar 18, 2009

    hey, Stick, this is awesome… portrays a real emotion, follows through on it and the reality that getting angry ain’t always the best idea. I could actually feel the emotions. good job dude.

  • Bullwinkle Muse on Mar 20, 2009

    A man after my own muse. I love the cadence of this, how it connects such words as ‘remains, and low, frail, ice accedes’ with a staccato rhythm.
    The mood is perfectly suited to the story. Great imagery.

  • MrZebra84 on Apr 9, 2009

    That poem is simply gorgeous. Wonderful piece.

  • Kate Smedley on Apr 11, 2009

    That’s a beautiful poem, I love the rhyming, like Adam I love the closing lines of the stanzas, a melancholy but beautiful feel to it.

  • Olivia Reason on Apr 16, 2009

    Love this. I am picturing anger as a thousand, broken crystals falling .

  • Stick on Apr 23, 2009

    Hi Steph, actually, the thousand broken crystals falling is the aftermath of the anger, not the anger itself. It is the self-reproach that happens afterwards, the result.

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