Foolish Heart Lying Lips Jaid ‘09

jaidadiz on Jul 16, 2011

Foolish heart be aware of lying lips.

Foolish heart

Are you heading for another fall

With your eyes open wide

Is there danger ahead

Take it slow halt for a while

For lying lips

Have no pride

When it seeks to get what it wants

Foolish heart

Take your time go slow

For lying lips

Have no remorse

Taking what is offered

While giving nothing in return

Foolish heart

How much pain can you bear

Seeking for something

That seem out of reach

Yet this foolish heart

Will never quit

Until lying lips

Cease to speak

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Comments (15)

isloooboy on Jul 16, 2011
Well, this foolish heart really never quit that’s true, very nice
Dreamy777 on Jul 16, 2011
Awesome poem Thanks
sambasivarao on Jul 16, 2011
Great poetry
PartizAnka on Jul 17, 2011
Wonderful poem!
Sebastian Onciu on Jul 17, 2011
Great poem!
yellow rose on Jul 17, 2011
And how to order him to remain silent heart,
When shouting, screaming that he loves,
And what if she could do,
If love the thrill a taunting?
jaidadiz on Jul 17, 2011
Thanks for the wonderful comments everyone. Yellow rose: a poet after my own heart, you are great
neopisiva on Jul 19, 2011
Excellent poem that is also a good and useful warning…:)
beingwell on Jul 20, 2011
Heart-felt! Nice post!
erwinkennythomas on Jul 20, 2011
wonderful! lying lips are the problem!
iloisabel on Jul 30, 2011
i really love poems,it’s just that i don’t know to make one, so i am glad i met lot of good poets here in Triond and you are one of them,thanks for sharing your thoughts and wonderful poems. keep up the good work!
Socorro Lawas on Aug 26, 2011
I’d rather have white lies than commitment.
laila on Aug 26, 2011
Amazingggg! <3 muahz
Socorro Lawas on Aug 27, 2011
Oops, my second visit.
Tiki33 on Oct 20, 2011
Nice poem! I see the creativity in this. Thanks for writing it.

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