Footfalls Past Noon

Liane Schmidt on Sep 4, 2008

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Can make the heart, once again swoon.

Like wisps into tomorrow
I melt with you

You are the purple hues
In my sunsets, the warm and heavy
Sighs, I feel, that make my knees
Shiver; that pushes two weary
Footfalls past noon
That conjures courage
To make love once again swoon

It is true
I see nothing more of confusion and riddles
I see nothing more of the space
That separated us
The space we once intimately knew

I am drifting toward the
Unfamiliar, I am moving
Closer to you

My heart stops a bit
My breath is sometimes labored
I am frightened, I am exhilarated
I’m not ready

And, you smile because
Somehow, you already knew

You let me run ahead, far out of sight
You allow me to fly far and wide, freely
You let me live independently
For you know deep down inside
The only way to truly love another
Is to first let them go and trust that if it’s meant to be,

True love will always return to you, wholeheartedly.

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IcyCucky on Sep 4, 2008
Love this: “Is to first let them go and trust that if it’s meant to be,

True love will always return to you, wholeheartedly.”

Beautiful words!
Darlene McFarlane on Sep 4, 2008
I love this on too, Liane!

I loved the feeling is gave me as I read and the pictures it painted in my head.

Darlene
nobert soloria bermosa on Sep 4, 2008
wow,beautiful,i love the 3 last lines though i’m not hoping that much -

The only way to truly love another

Is to first let them go and trust that if it’s meant to be,

True love will always return to you, wholeheartedly.

thanks Liane, it just brightens my day!!!
Kim Buck on Sep 4, 2008
Beautfilly read…

Thank you.
Judy Sheldon on Sep 4, 2008
So true, and you have written it so beautifully. Awesome job.
Anne Lyken-Garner on Sep 5, 2008
Lovely thoughts
The WAHM on Sep 5, 2008
Heartwarming. I wish I know how to write something like this. Sigh.
Ruby Hawk on Sep 5, 2008
Love is wonderful and so is your poetry. Best wishes, Ruby
maryspaul on Sep 6, 2008
So wonderful are your poems. You are a great poet… The picture too is awesome…

God bless…
maryspaul

P.S. Will you have time to read and comment on my compositions too? Thanks…
Donald Barr on Sep 7, 2008
Beautiful picture and Beautiful poem.
goodselfme on Sep 8, 2008
This really soothes the inner part of me. It is wonderfully written and thank you for posting. Please take a look at some of my writings and if you feel moved to gently comment, I would be most grateful. I am listed on triond.com
swapna on Sep 9, 2008
nice poem…….
valli on Sep 10, 2008
Lovely poem and beautiful picture.
LP Jardine on Sep 10, 2008
Very well written
Lauren Axelrod on Sep 12, 2008
This gives me chills. It makes me think about my relationship and the fact that both of us are so independent but, he respects that.
LP Jardine on Sep 16, 2008
Very moving.
jo oliver on Sep 17, 2008
Beautiful!

I wanted to add a comment here because I continued to get a bad securtiy string message while trying to post on your fear article. I very much enjoyed it. There was a lot of great info there. My biggest fear is dying before my daughter does. I am not sure that I will ever get over that fear and also fear that it will only grow greater with time. I will try my best to focus on some of the points in your article, though. Thanks
Liane Schmidt on Oct 9, 2008
Thank you all with all my heart for your beautiful, supportive comments.

Blessings & best wishes to all.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
poetic enigma on Nov 12, 2008
Wow, that is all I can say– this is a beautiful poem,
i’m speechless
tilted on Nov 15, 2008
Thanks for another great read i really injoyed it very much,very nice
trishia on Feb 4, 2009
I enjoyed reading this. True love does allow room to be free spirited;knowing real love returns!

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