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For a While

Ethics0006 on Sep 2, 2010
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I wrote this poem about the serious facts of our life. I want to change my lifestyle. I hope you will understand my emotions.

I was checking a file

Suddenly, I remember, I have to go a mile

I don’t like my lazy style

By mistake I broke a tile

I know that I am here for a while

I try to do love deeds and will always smile

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  • Alaina Ellington on Sep 2, 2010

    Thanks for sharing :)

  • Shamyl on Sep 2, 2010

    Do you really mean it? Anyway very precise but beautiful poem.

  • Eldridge on Sep 2, 2010

    Hmm…

  • AshleyApathy on Sep 2, 2010

    oh…lol

  • Tulan on Sep 2, 2010

    funny girl,

  • Inna Tysoe on Sep 2, 2010

    Thanks for that

  • Kaye TM on Sep 2, 2010

    cutie! =p

  • Raj the Tora on Sep 2, 2010

    Sure, you are right, we all have “Miles to go before we sleep” and “Lots of promises to keep”

  • carissimi on Sep 2, 2010

    sweet and much said with little words..

  • heidiefernandez on Sep 2, 2010

    short but very nice……thank you

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Sep 3, 2010

    A short and sweet poem.

  • LCM Linda on Sep 3, 2010

    Interesting poem. Thanks for sharing.

  • GodsGrace on Sep 3, 2010

    Very Creative Poem with the original life experience

  • The Soul Explorer on Sep 3, 2010

    simple but nice poem.

  • PSingh1990 on Sep 3, 2010

    Nice one….

    thanks for share.

    :-)

  • Abhipray Sahoo on Sep 3, 2010

    Great share!

  • webseowriters on Sep 3, 2010

    Thanks for sharing

  • yes me on Sep 3, 2010

    nice one cheers

  • R.Laws on Sep 3, 2010

    awesome!

  • giftarist on Sep 3, 2010

    Good move. :)

  • Lipstick on Sep 3, 2010

    yeah sometimes we just let our hair down and allow things to happen with us being unaffected
    nice poem :)

  • sandcastle on Sep 4, 2010

    nice flow!

  • Lighter on Sep 4, 2010

    Really nice poem.

  • Matty Z on Sep 7, 2010

    I like your poem, but you should’ve continued with it! I want to know the rest of your story! Its like a cliffhanger

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