To anyone who read this before, you would know that I wrote this for someone I truly love, to try and get her back. It failed. I am going to leave this up. I meant everything that I say in it.

I just want to be worth a damn,

Try and be her one and only man.

But when she moved so far away,

No longer was I just okay.

All I thought about was her,

I wanted to be hers for good I am sure.

She promised me forever,

Without any pressure.

Then she found the first guy,

I felt like I was stabbed in the eye.

Now she has found this one,

And she claims he is The One.

Now I am all lost,

Like a dark room moth.

She is all I truly want,

All the memories do haunt.

If I could only have her back,

Treat her like the leader of the pack.

She is still all I think about,

I want to keep along this route.

I have leaned so much,

From her, it all.

She motivates me,

To get past my knee.

I thought no longer yet still it hurts,

With my heart all the pain flirts.

To me she means the world,

My feelings will still unfurl.

If I could only take her in my arms,

I could protect her from all the harm.

I would pull her back,

And we could stay in our shack.

I will give her all my love,

Hold her like that precious dove.

For her I will step in the fray,

No one will stand in my way.

I will fight for her until the end,

Until I can put that ring on her hand.

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  • Brandon on Mar 11, 2009

    Not bad at all! :D I hope things work out man!
    Keep up the good positive attitude though…That will take you far and long!

  • angelonearth2001 on Mar 13, 2009

    Go buy the ring and give her that poem…..gosh i will died for that kind of poem showing love to me, a real piece of jewel coming from the heart…….marvelous

  • Steve West on Mar 21, 2009

    Spoken with real affection and conviction.

  • Leanne M. McCann on Apr 6, 2009

    Sometimes we need to let go and move on…
    find another,
    find our other.

    ps can you read some of my stuff. please.

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