Written for a close friend who left her small baby to join the Air Force to make a better life for them both.

Away you flew on that big jet plane,
leaving behind those you love and  in pain.
Yes you are doing what is right,
you will see when coming home is in sight.
What you will learn while your away,
never again will you yearn I pray.
Yes I know you miss your baby,
her smell, her smile, her beautiful eyes,
and the softness of her skin.
that is normal with a mothers love
you cry but you will win.
this is for her remember, not to go back to where you been.
I am proud of you, for what you do,
It takes courage and hope with each clue.
Everything will fall into place,
I promise you after you finish this race.
Be safe my friend and never look back,
you are where you are from courage you don’t lack.
Although you feel alone in that foreign place,
My heart and thoughts are with you with grace.

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  • James DeVere on Nov 16, 2008

    That’s so sweet and sad. ;( j

  • joystick7 on Nov 16, 2008

    I respect army, navy, airforce and other disciplines who devote themselves for the country..
    So my salute to your nice article :)

  • Debra. on Nov 16, 2008

    I give my prayers to your friend, linda. I give my prayers to her daughter. When her daughter grows up she will come to know what a courageous and beautiful mother she has. God bless her for taking control for her country!

  • Glynis Smy on Nov 16, 2008

    That lady has courage two fold. First to leave her child and second to fight for the protection of that child and others. A moving tribute

  • jackalina on Nov 16, 2008

    Sometimes in life you do (thank god) get people like your friend, who will sacrafice alot to do what they need to for there family and nation. Lovely work.

  • papaleng on Nov 16, 2008

    very touchy one with emotions clearly expressed.

  • Will Gray on Nov 16, 2008

    So beautifully written and so much emotion! God Bless.

  • Inna Tysoe on Nov 16, 2008

    My hopes and prayers are with you and yours.

    Inna

  • PR Mace on Nov 16, 2008

    May God bless and take care of your friend. I hope they will be together again soon.

  • poo on Nov 16, 2008

    It’s a excellent poem so well written Great!!. I don’t have words to say, just so exotic and beautiful :)

  • eddiego65 on Nov 17, 2008

    Wonderful tribute to your friend! Simply beautiful!

  • winter on Nov 17, 2008

    WOW! I cant wait for Jodl to get this poem and I wish to see her face reading this! Shes a wonderful mother and is doing the greatest thing for her and her daughter! I wish her best of life and soon she will be with the baby ande be able to smile and tell her she did it just for her! She will always be proud of Jodl! We all miss you and we know you have all the courage and its been your dream! We love you JODL! hugs and kisses!

  • Lydia on Nov 18, 2008

    I’m glad so many people can finally see what I’ve known all along… Jodi, YOU ARE AMAZING! and you always have been.. and you always will be. My strong, brave friend. I love you.

  • lindalulu on Nov 25, 2008

    Jodi, I know this is so hard for you right now, but everything will be ok! Promise!!!! We love you and are so very proud of you!!! Be safe and think about the future!

  • lindalulu on Jan 30, 2009

    Jodi I knew you could make it threw! Now you will be joining Ethan in our American support.

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