I liked this new perspective of love or against love. Good one!

Good poem, melancholy and expressive.

You really struck a chord with this poem, it says everything, the pain and the difficult of letting go, even when you know you should … beautifully done.

Lovely poem. see u on my article.

The struggle and torment of ending a love and moving on. A very heartfelt piece. Wonderful poem, Ruther!

nice work po.

great piece!

what was behind in this poem? Jealosy? By reading behind the lines, if the reader is not careful…it would lead to other meaning. However, each poet has an underlying meaning of every poem he writes.

There’s really a poet in you, kabayan. This is a wonderful and masterful piece.

Great share! I loved this poem..lovely piece. thanks for sharing this great stuff

i really enjoyed this piece. cant wait to read more. hope u check out some of my new stuff .

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Beautiful yet painful. I like it.

Passionate work.

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.

nice work, kudos!

excellent flow,very touching.loved the truncated line format,
those words are powerful.

Nice choice of words…and very clear expressions.

Forbid me love or forbidden love. I think the latter is hard to avoid my friend. A forceful poetry for valentine’s, kabayan.

Another forceful poetry timely for valentine’s, kabayan.

This piece conclude one thing, a poet can not make a good poem without love. Enlightening piece, on love.
Great work!

wow.

Very intriguing poem,I liked it.

Shakespeare, ikaw ba yan? Hehe… Wonderful poem as usual.