As a woman who has been mistreated, abused, lied to and cheated on, I wrote this poem for all women who have been in abusive or controlling relationships. For all of us women who have struggled to hold on to who they are in the midst of the craziness and chaos of an abusive relationship. Break the chains, empower yourself! Demand respect!

Forbidden

You claimed that you loved me

But what you loved was some idyllic vision

You did not want to know the woman that I am

You wanted me to become your angelic apparition

When I did not fit into your mold

You reached in and tried to change the core of me

You may have hoped that I’d be putty in your hands

But at the core of me, there is strength, you see 

How dare you try to drown my spirit ?

I will not be submerged into oblivion ! 

To try to control me, is not only wrong;

In my life, it is forbidden !

Did you think that I would surrender to your will,

that you could stunt the growth of my determination?

Did you think that I would crumble at your feet ? 

Did you think, that I could be bullied into submission ?

How wrong you were about me

if you thought that I would give away my power

I demand respect, for I am a woman who has her own voice

I am not something that you can conquer! 

Written by Angela Ohm 

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  • Profit Buzz on Dec 23, 2011

    I hope you find your peace.

  • lxdollarsxl on Dec 23, 2011

    All women deserve respect and men who do not give this are not real men.

  • Vivek Ratan on Dec 24, 2011

    We are not men

    Without all women

    They are our friends

    They are our fans

    Walk they with us

    When hand in hand

    Good of us becomes

    Elegant and excellent

    They play role of relatives

    They play role of parents

    So affectionate they are

    They are so decent

    With them we can have

    Our existence

    Without their presence

    Life has no essence

    Brilliant and beautiful poem,Angela

  • ImKarn23 on Dec 24, 2011

    Here, here! Bravo! Standing O!
    Keep up the great work!

  • tankermone on Dec 24, 2011

    Glad to see some new verses from you Angela! Full of power!

  • Razorwind on Dec 24, 2011

    Very nice Angela. I’m glad that your expressing your feelings in poetry and not in negative ways. Men don’t always treat women right in general. It would be cool if you checked out my poem “Stone Goddess” I wrote it as an encouragement.

  • duck01 on Dec 24, 2011

    A very powerful and poignant poem.

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