An entry for Duff’s Writing Challenge #10.
Forbiddin Love: The only kind worth fighting for.

When I first saw you in your dungarees and newsboy hat,
Oh! I thought. Why I can’t just be like that,
Whistle a tune down the dusty road,
Alas! He could never be a part of my world.

My chauffeured ride soon drove on by,
Sending a dust cloud into his eye,
I saw him fall; we were out of sight,
I couldn’t help but cry myself to sleep that night.

The next day came, bringing the rain,
I ran to the road to find him again,
I’d seen where he fell, here under the bell,
I had dressed just like him, my family I could never tell.

I heard a voice, he stood there,
I couldn’t help but stand and stare,
“I know you,” he said, “your dust is in my eye.”
“Forgive me,” said I, “for you I cried last night.”

He pulled me in his arms, I held him close,
Taking in his scent, the smell of his clothes,
I heard my family all calling my name,
A copper came along and took my friend away.

I stood there stunned in disbelief,
“It’s alright my dear; he’s a well known thief.”
I turned to my mother and spat at her feet,
“You disregard my friend, so you’ll disregard me!”

I turned and ran in direction of the Police,
With one thing in mind; I’d assure his release,
But I was stopped short, for up ahead, there he was,
getting out the car shaking hands with the cop.

I jogged up gently saying, “Hey, what’s this?”
My friend just replied, “He’s my Uncle, young Miss.”
I couldn’t help but smile; my arms around his neck.
We kissed; people saw; gossip starts; what the heck!

I turned to see my family all stand gob-smacked,
They can think what they like, ‘cause I’m in love with a guy,
in his dungarees and soft cap.

I turned to my Love and kissed him with a grin,
I don’t want to be rich. I want you…that’s it!

© Marie Milton

 

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  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 11, 2009

    nice please read
    THE LUCKY BENCH

  • martie on Sep 11, 2009

    awe….that is a lovely tale told in a very sweet way!

  • Jane Jane on Sep 11, 2009

    Duff will surely like this.=)

  • Darla Cooke on Sep 11, 2009

    Great poem for the challenge!

  • cutedrishti8 on Sep 11, 2009

    Nice one to read…Great work…

  • Jacques Berkeley on Sep 11, 2009

    Good!

  • Hugo La Rosa on Sep 11, 2009

    You are a woman of challenges!

  • KitKat93 on Sep 11, 2009

    very nice tale i enjoyed it very much

  • giftarist on Sep 12, 2009

    Great read! I like this!

  • hfj on Sep 14, 2009

    A tale of true love. Nicely written poem for the challenge Marie dear. Well done friend.

  • oldster on Sep 14, 2009

    Well done Marie.
    Jolly piece.

  • B.S. Kitty on Sep 14, 2009

    I love it, Marie. That is so sweet.

  • mindopener on Sep 14, 2009

    Great poem, thanks for putting it up!

  • Ruby Hawk on Sep 14, 2009

    Well done, way to go.

  • Rod Ferrandino on Sep 15, 2009

    You make it believable; good story told in verse.

  • Duff D Moss on Sep 15, 2009

    This was very captivating. A great little piece, and a happy ending – YAY!

    Thanks gain for playing dude. I always enjoy your entries.

  • I Have Had Enough on Sep 16, 2009

    Good job Marie, you can sure tell your an English gal with this one.

  • Brenda Nelson on Sep 16, 2009

    very romantic.. people should fight for love, but too many fight for the love of money

  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 21, 2009

    Love cannot be forbidden
    When we love
    It is with a commitment
    Love cannot have any limitation
    It how ever cannot be forbidden
    For if it is
    Then one is sadly mistaken.
    As then it is merely lust
    Not love
    Have you ever
    Your love really forbidden

    Life is a series of passionate
    Loves, lusts and sex
    We all get mixed up
    We all get in a vex

    Love is freely
    Given and taken,
    Love is never my dear
    Ever, ever forbidden

    It comes like
    The morning sunrise
    It does surprise
    When one sees in lovers’ eyes,
    For the first time
    One is stunned
    Eyes get transfixed
    At that lovely moment
    Can then love,
    My loved one,
    Ever be forbidden?

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