A poem about deception and secret love.

The feelings we have are forbidden,

for now I am your secret girlfriend.

Our families they do not approve,

of the endless love that we share.

We must continue with the deception,

meeting only at random moments.

We must keep our love affair quiet,

sneaking away for brief encounters.

This heartache I can no longer bear,

I want to shout our love to the world.

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  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 4, 2009

    Love and deception
    My what a combination
    Lovers should and must be bold
    Or else they’ll leave this world cold.

    Be bold take your step
    But as at Amsterdam airport
    Each moment they say
    ‘’ Mind your step.’’

    Good luck to you
    Take your decision,
    Life is yours
    Its no one else’s game
    You will have to be happy
    If you can
    No one from ones heart
    Love shall ban.

    Take a stand
    Pave your way
    You alone and must
    Have your life’s say

  • raman13 on Oct 4, 2009

    Great Article

    Best Regards

  • lillyrose on Oct 4, 2009

    Lovely poem and lovely wording.

  • Sourav on Oct 4, 2009

    You know… secret love affair is often more romantic than a normal one. It gives the lovers more passion… so it’s good in some way. Enjoyed your poem.

  • Petalm on Oct 4, 2009

    Shout!

  • cardy on Oct 4, 2009

    A lovely poem from you!

  • ken bultman on Oct 4, 2009

    Shhh!

  • Yvonne K on Oct 4, 2009

    tell the world

  • Butterfly Musings on Oct 4, 2009

    Awesome!! so poetic and passionate

  • Linda Lori on Oct 5, 2009

    Powerful poem, powerful love!

  • Trailing Spouse on Oct 5, 2009

    I can feel the frustration of the secret and the passion of the affair………..be careful

  • giftarist on Oct 5, 2009

    That was great…

  • Jane Jane on Oct 5, 2009

    nice poem. forbidden love is sure hard.

  • writing4angels on Oct 5, 2009

    Beautifully written about secret love. Turned out to be simple but effective.

  • STEVE666 on Oct 5, 2009

    Well, you’ve told the world now, Darla.

  • CA Johnson on Oct 5, 2009

    I thought this poem was great. It is so romantic how the couple in your poem have to sneak around instead of being out together in public. Thumbs up!

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 3, 2009

    Spoken with a pure and loving heart.

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