A love that lasts forever.

I never knew I could love anyone
until I met you.
You made me realize
what love is all about,
in your own way,
you helped me break the barrier of hate.
Long enough to catch a glimpse of a love
that is so everlasting.
You have given me memories to occupy
the emptiness of my mind.
You have given me happiness
to fulfill my every dreams.
And, you have given me a taste of love
that can last… FOREVER!

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  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jan 8, 2009

    Princess, this’s lovely and romance!

  • rutherfranc on Jan 8, 2009

    getting sentimental again, huh? I like the message in this one

  • Adam Henry Sears on Jan 8, 2009

    I love this tribute, very inspiring.
    By the way, in your first line, I think you mean ‘knew’.
    Also,.. if you separate some of the thoughts here by putting in spaces the poem will look even more attractive.

  • Angie0000023 on Jan 8, 2009

    Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it!

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 8, 2009

    An enjoyable and well written poem.

    Christine

  • Maria Blazz on Jan 8, 2009

    A princess in love, that’s romantic!(ps: did u see love is inspiring for everyone ;) )

  • AC Hamilton III on Jan 8, 2009

    Great job princess. It is a very endearing work.

    AC

  • Mysfit on Jan 8, 2009

    sweet and just wonderful…

  • nutuba on Jan 8, 2009

    This is beautiful!

  • papaleng on Jan 9, 2009

    A Princess is in love, the thoughts are beautiful, romantic and passionate.

  • Eunice Tan on Jan 9, 2009

    So sweet…

  • myria on Jan 9, 2009

    Very beautiful! We all hope to feel a love like that.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Jan 9, 2009

    it’s just so cool to be in love,

  • Unofre Pili on Jan 10, 2009

    This is nice. Reminded me of ” The Sonnet From the Portuguese” by Elizabeth Barret Browning.

  • william rodriguez II on Jan 13, 2009

    Nice,very sweet?

  • Constantinee on Jan 14, 2009

    simple n sweet

  • eddiego65 on Jan 15, 2009

    Lovely and sweet.

  • SJ Dickens on Jan 21, 2009

    Love makes the world go round indeed. Isn’t it a song or something? Nice piece again.

  • Lizzie Green on Jan 21, 2009

    Its nice to know that even when your feeling lost yourself, that others are getting to experience the true joy that love can bring. A really unusual style, but you really have a good way with words x

  • dawn xoc on Jan 23, 2009

    lovely!

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 24, 2009

    So romantic, really well written

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