Forever a Smile

obikelvin on Aug 16, 2010

Forever a smile.

To make her smile,
A gift it would be.
To forever make her smile,
Would be a gift for me.

To add to such beauty,
A smile compared to none.
From this day forward,
My new goal has begun.

To touch her heart,
And warm her smile each day.
This woill be my path if she chooses,
It will be my choosen way.

Even if never deep in her heart,
Her smile shall never fade.
I promise you this on your day.
Forever this oath I have made.

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Tina Cassello on Aug 16, 2010
I was good to read one of your lovely, romantic poems again. I like the lines “To forever make her smile, Would be a gift for me.” especially. Again you show your loving nature of finding your pleasure in giving her pleasure. This is what love should be about, each seeking to please the other and bring out their best qualities rather than looking at what they do for you.
Mary Patricia Bird on Aug 17, 2010
This is a lovely poem, however I find the first stanza to be repetitive. The first two lines say the same thing as the second two lines.

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