Forever in a Day

deep blue on Dec 6, 2009

Tags: emotion, forever, forever in a day, infatuation, lasting love, Life, lovers, motivation, opinions, Poetry, time

Making love last forever.

Forever in a day,

That’s what lovers say,

When together at play,

Till sunset by the bay.

Love consummated,

Till the rush abated,

Another urge waited,

Emotions to be noted.

But however love so pure,

Could long enough endure,

The monotony of pleasure,

Whose sting lasts in the rapture.

The pleasure lingered shorter,

Reaching the eleventh past quarter,

Restless lovers expired to the latter,

And definitely lived happily ever after.

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Lady Sunshine on Dec 6, 2009
You sweep girls off their feet, don’t you Will?
Themax on Dec 6, 2009
wow..,What a beautiful ending and very nice poem full of love and peace,Thanks
Goodselfme on Dec 6, 2009
Very well penned.I enjoyed it a lot.
Guy Hogan on Dec 6, 2009
A love poem for a Sunday and football. A lovely combination.
clay hurtubise on Dec 6, 2009
lol, fun piece! We’ve been together 14 years and love only grows deeper.
Thanks,
Clay
Joie Schmidt on Dec 6, 2009
Absolutely lovely*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Frances Lawrence on Dec 6, 2009
Well written.
Ruby Hawk on Dec 6, 2009
Loved your poem.
CHAN LEE PENG on Dec 6, 2009
True love should last forever!
nightcharmer on Dec 7, 2009
What a beautiful poem! And those words, especially the last stanza, simply amazing! Like the picture too!
Snooky on Dec 7, 2009
So Nice!
Kairos on Dec 7, 2009
incurable romantic
PhoenixRox on Dec 7, 2009
What a beautiful piece. ever after it is.. Very passionate
Priyanka Bhowmick on Dec 7, 2009
good happy ending… sweet poem!!
Francois Hagnere on Dec 7, 2009
Very moving! Congratulations Will!
Take care my friend.
giftarist on Dec 7, 2009
A great piece, well done!
ken bultman on Dec 7, 2009
Name one.
xoxo on Dec 7, 2009
Wow… Loved each lines… Very romantic…
metro7 on Dec 7, 2009
wow can feel the passion through out the poem imagination running wild n a lovely ending.gud one. let it keep coming.man.http://www.urlzy.com/50
The Last Ogre on Dec 7, 2009
Very nice. Good rhymes!
Brenda Nelson on Dec 7, 2009
Great poem, and love the picture you put together for it too!
athena goodlight on Dec 11, 2009
Ecstatic! You captured the moment so well. I love it!
barbara kasey smith on Dec 12, 2009
A wonderful heartfelt writing…I loved it!
lillyrose on Dec 14, 2009
BEAUTIFUL.xxxx
ladydryle on Dec 25, 2009
beautiful…a well expressed poem..(^_^)

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