Tell me what you guys think.

Black hair swooning,

Red lips, fair skin seducing

Your attentions

And your love

Deadly

Lingering

Like a shadow

Yet all I see

Is a ghost masquerading

In a false shell of beauty

“Eternally mine” she whispers

But only in death

Am I eternally yours.

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  • Shawn on Feb 13, 2011

    good stuff bro

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