For my love.

The orchids pale to compare
With my love, my sweet so fair.
Majestic mountains can not hold a flame
To the one who bears the name,
Shelly.

A prize won in heaven.
A fortune from the same.
An immense love I have in
The one who bears the name,
Shelly.

I’ll be here for her forever
Until we see this through.
Our lives, our love could never dissever.
Until, we meet again, love, I love you,
Shelly.

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  • Marie Milton on Aug 18, 2010

    Oh boy REP! Love surely can bring out the poet in people :) )

    I am lost for words :) …it’s so beautiful.

    I didn’t realise you were a poetical man. Nice Job man!

  • Marie Milton on Aug 18, 2010

    Wow!

  • sweetwords on Aug 18, 2010

    love is a wonderful thing to have and to experience :) and does bring out the best out of everyone.
    this peice of write is beautiful. the word you wrote speak loud and strong leaving the reader breathless :D

    sweetly written <3

  • thestickman on Aug 19, 2010

    kewl!

  • Matty Z on Aug 19, 2010

    Atta boy Puck! Thats one from the heart!

  • nasumbu on Aug 24, 2010

    phew am out of words

  • Bo Russo on Aug 26, 2010

    Very nice Puckster.

  • miraj on Aug 26, 2010

    wow Rep,

    that was sweet as honey.

  • Butterfly Musings on Aug 26, 2010

    Very sweet!

  • BradONeill on Aug 29, 2010

    ahhh very good puckster very good.

  • B.S. Kitty on Sep 16, 2010

    I’ve tried to comment on this like three times. Hopefully, it will stick this time. It’s wonderful. Thank you.

  • Inxxu on Oct 3, 2010

    That is just so beautiful, I hope nothing will take away this feeling…
    Great poem
    ;)

  • STEVE666 on Oct 20, 2010

    Nice tribute to Shelley, Rep. Although personally I prefer Byron and Keats.

  • B.S. Kitty on Feb 26, 2011

    :)

  • Brenda Nelson on Mar 20, 2011

    Awe that’s so sweet – I found this because Marie was so good to spam it in the forum in the thread with our names on it.

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