Forever Wasting Time

Darla Cooke on Sep 11, 2009

Tags: body, Dark Void, drained, Empty, growing older, hollow, searching, tired, wasting time, weak

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A poem about getting older.

The day has finally come,

I’ve gotten so much older.

I’m tired, weak and drained,

my body feels empty and hollow.

I’m now living in a dark void,

lost and searching endlessly.

I’m forever wasting time,

missing too many days of my life.

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Comments (11)

cardy on Sep 11, 2009
Makes me look at myself I am 32 in november I feel like this now fab write form you!
ken bultman on Sep 11, 2009
Poor baby! Wanna swap calendars?
raman13 on Sep 11, 2009
Impressive

Keep the good work on

Best Regards
cutedrishti8 on Sep 11, 2009
Nice one to read…Great work…..
Uma Shankari on Sep 11, 2009
Nice poem about getting and feeling lonely. Except for the personification, I know you have many active years ahead.
Olivia Van Logum on Sep 11, 2009
You’ve summed up exactly how I feel every Monday morning!
Ruby Hawk on Sep 11, 2009
Oh my, you babies, get out there and enjoy life.
syedaqa on Sep 12, 2009
Nice poem best regards
petercurtis97 on Sep 12, 2009
Nice poem
STEVE666 on Sep 14, 2009
You sure put a downer on getting old, Darla!
CutestPrincess on Oct 2, 2009
it’s not too late! enjoy your everyday with your love ones!

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