A lover’s love song of devotion.

A dream came and swept me away
And gave a new meaning to day
A blessing from heaven did stray
That in love forever I’d stay
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Now Joy kissed each moment I knew
Each heartbeat was only for you
Such wonder which we wandered through
Where wishes do really come true
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The weary world was swept away
Replaced by the glories of you
And oh what our time put us through
So in love forever we’d stay
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But doubt rocked this haven we knew
No love could live content each day
Such madness set senses to stray
Till troubles did challenge what’s true
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Forever’s love fought for its stay
That all lesser lusts would soon stray
But that was a far away day
When dream came and swept me away

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  • Kharla Jolly on Sep 5, 2012

    Storms threaten all good relationships, that’s a given. Very nicely written poem, with love,promise,hope,wonder, and sadness all together in one basket. I really like it, thanks for sharing

  • Kai Vicky on Sep 5, 2012

    Awesome. Thanks for sharing.

  • stevetheblogger on Sep 5, 2012

    As the old crooner said you wrote it your way
    Great read
    Best Wishes
    stevetheblogger

  • Jswana on Sep 5, 2012

    Can I copy awesome from Kai? This is indeed. Beautiful! :) not to mention your choices of songs to fit your verses.

  • smokychristine on Sep 5, 2012

    Good work. New love does sometimes seem a dream.

  • Samuel Choo on Sep 5, 2012

    Nice share!

  • elee on Sep 5, 2012

    Forever’s love fought for its stay

  • girishpuri on Sep 5, 2012

    great share

  • Tiki33 on Sep 6, 2012

    You just keep generating some great poetry expressions. They always make you think.

  • johnmariow on Sep 6, 2012

    Romance over troubled waters. I enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing.

  • Robin L on Sep 6, 2012

    Great share, Martin:)

  • realityspeaks on Sep 6, 2012

    Beautiful

  • gaby7 on Sep 6, 2012

    Thanks for sharing!

  • lauralu on Sep 6, 2012

    Love is a blessing

  • blogspoterss on Sep 6, 2012

    nice share
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    thanks

  • TamWill on Sep 6, 2012

    Very nice Martin

  • Aileen Tecson on Sep 7, 2012

    very inspiring, each wording, carefully thought..

  • marqjonz on Sep 8, 2012

    You make this form look easy.

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