Pain, forgiveness and letting go.

welcome pain, old lover

allow me to embrace you

for I do not want to forget the comfort of your misery

neither your perfection nor your gray hairs nor lines drawn with age

allow me to hold and memorize your imperfections

heal me with your presence

gently kiss my wounds

 

loneliness, was it our fault

dreams, were they each others burden

forgiveness whispered, yet resentment  roared

does healing grow in a moment

does trust take root in a day

will the vastness left console us

 

do not excuse, justify or be blind

remember well

acknowledge and look into the flames as each hurtful log is consumed

watch bitterness flee in the hot, black smoke

in the silence and cold

pear into the ashes and forget

 

do not try to understand

gently restore

hide well her indiscretions

protect her from her fears

release her with dignity

bless her with silent tears

wish for her favor

 

 

Bienvenido dolor, Viejo amor

Déjame abrazarte

Porque no quiero olvidar la comodidad de mi miseria

Ni tu perfección, ni tus cabellos grises, ni las líneas trazadas por la edad

Déjame sostenerte y memorizar tus  imperfecciones

Sáname con tu presencia

Bésame suavemente mis heridas

 

Soledad, fue nuestro error

Sueños, fueron nuestros pesares

Suspiros de perdón, aunque resentimiento ruge

Crece la cura en un momento

Confianza hace raíces en un día

La grandeza que nos queda nos consolara

 

No perdones, justifiques or seas ciego

Recuerda bien

Reconoce y mira en las llamas mientras cada tronco se consume

Observa la amargura fugarse en el caliente, humo Negro

En el silencio y frió

Convertirse en cenizas y olvidar

No trates de entender para gentilmente

Esconde bien sus indiscreciones

Protégela contra sus miedos

Libérala con dignidad

Bendícela con lagrimas silenciosas

Desea por su beneficio

 

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Comments (14)
  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 2, 2010

    You have expressed yourself so well in this piece.

    Christine

  • papaleng on Jun 2, 2010

    a deeply heartfelt one. you have my liked.

  • Tom Woodside on Jun 2, 2010

    great depth

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jun 2, 2010

    How beautiful, you are a new discovery on Triond. Keep it up.

  • heidiefernandez on Jun 2, 2010

    liked it, genuinely crafted!!!

  • stranger007 on Jun 3, 2010

    Great writing. I like this

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 3, 2010

    A well rafted piece of work.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jun 3, 2010

    if u have caught the eye of

    AGONY AUNT

    u have hit the sky

    ask me not why

    as the aunty does help

    weaklings to rise…

    I AM JUST ONE

  • Yalonda on Jun 3, 2010

    Your writing style is absolutely beautiful! I love this!

  • Lady Sunshine on Jun 5, 2010

    Eloquently crafted piece.

  • serowa on Jun 6, 2010

    You are deep and very inspirational!

  • V rank on Jun 7, 2010

    unbelievable… good piece…

  • sara20 on Jun 7, 2010

    nice and interesting piece.

  • write4money on Jun 12, 2010

    Nice piece.

    Good information is available here, and keeps on writing.

    Anjalina…

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