A haiku—and it is more than a haiku. It’s my voice, my stand on the debatable issue of what a haiku is.

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Having mastered the rules from A to Z,

I wrote many haiku—

which now strike me

as boring.

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  • Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr. on Oct 30, 2009

    You have found your voice; that’s the most important in any creative activity. Have fun, sticking to 5-7-5, three lines, or seasonal reference rule is boring if not annoying bec. you know them already. Bravo!

  • j.d.adams on Oct 30, 2009

    From time to time I read such comments like “Is this a haiku?” Those who are well-read about haiku should not ask such silly questions. This is a very powerful assertion of your voice!

  • Justfer on Nov 13, 2009

    cool!

  • Grace Kathryn on Nov 16, 2009

    Always do your own thing.

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