Love poem.

Effervescent heart standing alone

Beating loudly

Translucent and pure

Eager to share a beat

Lifted gently out of its’ isolation

By the strong arms of another pure heart

Racing steadily and confidently

Slowly the unique rhythms of both hearts

Become one

Surrounding them with impenetrable walls

Of warmth and trust

Though persistently threatened

By armies of complicated realities

The hearts remain together

Forever united

Protected by their

Fortress of love

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  • diamondpoet on Nov 13, 2009

    That was beautiful, and deep. You are a passionate writer.

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 15, 2009

    Lovely poem

  • Goodselfme on Nov 15, 2009

    Beautiful portrait with words. Great poem!

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 15, 2009

    Beautiful ideas of love and sometimes true.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Dec 13, 2009

    Lovely poem! Ideas went smoothly!

  • Melody SJAL on Feb 22, 2010

    Wow, that’s lovely.

  • drelayaraja on Feb 22, 2010

    Great write :)

  • dino renaldo on Oct 21, 2010

    great poem…..

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