Fortress

Judi Eddy on Mar 8, 2010

Tags: barriers, castle, fortress, power, strength, stronghold

My Safe barrier.

Dont ever try to knock me down,
For I always rise up from a fall,
You can never try to break me,
I will always bounce back and stand tall.

Light my fire I dare you to try,
Throw sticks and stones to make me cry,
Hurt Me, you can try with all your might
But I am strong enough to put up a good fight.

You may think you can break my fortress down,
But in my defence I will laugh and fool around,
Up go my barriers, come what may,
So don’t even bother to bring me down today….or any day

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Ranjan Mathews on Mar 8, 2010
With crocodiles in your moat
And The Enemy without a boat
Your fortress will never crumble
Come rain or thunder rumble !
Darla Cooke on Mar 8, 2010
Nice poem.
8Shei8 on Mar 8, 2010
Uplifting write!
jimbob1 on Mar 9, 2010
Jude…thats the spirit…nothing wronf with displaying a fiesty nature and letting the world know that you are not a pushover. Good on you and thank you for a tremendous write that got another one of my votes. I enjoy the fact that you are open about you ability and determination to stand tall and firm.
sambhafusia on Mar 9, 2010
Great write well done..
Michael Eboh on Mar 10, 2010
Inspiring poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.
Wordcrafter on Mar 23, 2010
Thanks Judi for the invite ti read your work. I really like this piece.
You\’ve got a lot of spunk and determination.
Kakraba Afful on Mar 23, 2010
Ranjan! I luv the Ranjanism
Kakraba Afful on Mar 23, 2010
hmm, I guess I can you onback you break Satan’s spine!

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