Sometimes memories are more real than the present moment.

The photo on the bridge
Was his favorite
The one they asked a stranger to take.
The sun was shy that day
So was she.

Feeding bits of bread to gulls
Asking questions that drew them closer
He recalls the meal they shared on the pier.

Her charcoal hair was now diamond
But the emerald of her eyes
Had never changed.
He had forgotten that her hosiery was cream colored
Until just this moment.

Is it time that blurred these two?
Or tears?

Her eyes were wide under the clouds
Now faded in the print he held
Before placing it next to her head
On the satin pillow
That would hold her
For eternity.

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Comments (10)
  • Debra. on Jan 24, 2009

    That was a beautiful piece, Reilley. your poetry is always a joy to read.I truly enjoyed it.

    God bless, my friend.

  • Sharona on Jan 24, 2009

    WoW! I really like it. Such feeling.

  • The Quail on Jan 24, 2009

    That was a beautiful piece.

  • QuinMonty86 on Jan 24, 2009

    You made me cry in my coffee, darn it.

  • AC Hamilton III on Jan 24, 2009

    Nicely developed imagery…capturing the essence of moments.

  • Michele Cameron Drew on Jan 24, 2009

    Poise, perfection and passion in prose. :)

    -M

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 24, 2009

    sentimental and of the moment. Great stuff.

  • Morgana on Jan 24, 2009

    How extremely beautiful and touching . I absolutely loved it.

  • Josephine on Jan 26, 2009

    I read this before somewhere, by you of course.
    I needed to revisit to be reminded forgotten memories should be cherished and protected.

  • Patrick Bernauw on Jan 27, 2009

    You really write the poetry I like, Mr. Reilley.

    “The sun was shy that day
    So was she.”

    Wonderful lines!

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