A wee Sunday one cheers.

First it starts with little steps

Onward step by step

Route of our future

Working towards Independence

A right of all free thinking people

Rhizome shoots comes to mind

Democracy a human right.

….

That was a wee acrostic run

The catch word being forward

A party slogan the real call for

Independence is a forward thinking

Quote Forward and it automatically brings

A flood of meanings and definitions of taking

The next step:

.

I know I took a wee break from Rants

Well, I think it’s over

I will try and keep them tame

As best one can cheers

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  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 23, 2011

    I like your rants, Matt and I think we should all be forward thinking.
    An enjoyable piece.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Oct 23, 2011

    Militant piece.

  • Andrew Handley on Oct 23, 2011

    I think you mean human right, not humane right

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 23, 2011

    Matt, I like your new poetry, but I loved your rants. Don’t grow too tame.

  • tonywriter on Oct 23, 2011

    wonderful poetry friend

  • erwinkennythomas on Oct 23, 2011

    rants and annoyance! the substance of this poetry!

  • Karen Gross on Oct 23, 2011

    When I think of Scotland\’s battle for freedom, the movie Braveheart comes to mind. Rhizome shoots (I had to look this up) conjure an image more like modern Scotsmen huddling in the pub after work, mumbling about the bloody British into their pints, with the occasional rant like yours shooting up out of the pub. Is that anything like what you had in mine with this poem?

  • yes me on Oct 23, 2011

    No no Karen, my Rants in the pub sometimes… is for certain ears sometimes… other ears collect, I just hope it was worth the visit for them, ha ha ha cheers

  • Tiki33 on Oct 23, 2011

    Agree little steps forward and onward. This is uniquely presented. Thanks for the share!

  • mdrkarim7 on Oct 24, 2011

    nice piece of work.

  • FX777222999 on Oct 24, 2011

    That’s the way to live.

  • LoveDoctor on Oct 24, 2011

    It’s a wee Monday! Lol. cool piece.

  • ittech on Oct 25, 2011

    nice write up

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