Fountain of Youth

8Shei8 on Jan 29, 2010

Tags: Forever young, fountain of youth, humor

Fountain of youth, forever young, humor.

(image by http://www.thegreatillusion.com)

Ah!

If there was a fountain of youth

I would plunged right in

Like an amateur diver

Sit and bathe leisurely

Like a beautiful swan in a deserted pond

And then,

Revolutionize

To glorify once again

Beauty

Strength

Freedom

And even wisdom

Me, vain?

Certainly not I!

Why is it wrong my dear friend?

To stay forever young

To be careless and free

To dance the night away

Without the aches and pain the next day

Yes!

I dream of a fountain of youth

I would even settle

When my time comes (soon enough)

For a fountain of middle age

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Videomark on Jan 29, 2010
It might be nice to be young again – but then I think about all the stupid things I did.
stephan a waters on Jan 29, 2010
yes to be 4 ever young
ken bultman on Jan 29, 2010
Heh, heh. Me, too.
joyhyena29 on Jan 29, 2010
well done^^
anurag kochar on Jan 29, 2010
lovely…
Sweet girl on Jan 29, 2010
Nice post.

Thanks to share this one.

Pakize
Mickey Pig Knuckles on Jan 29, 2010
Oh Yes 8Shei8, to be young again is a thought that most have from time to time. I wonder if we would make the same mistakes all over again. It would be so awesome to meet my very first true love as its been so long as our young lives seperated when I joined the service and received a dear john letter. I would rather not re-live that part as it was extremely painful. Thank You for sharing your playful poem and causing us all to reflect upon our younger years. I really enjoyed this Brillent Poem…

Mickey Pig Knuckles
T. S. Lewis on Jan 29, 2010
I felt that one all the way in my aching back. lol
Jenilia12 on Jan 29, 2010
great writing….go ahead
Anupam Kachroo on Jan 29, 2010
haha ….. dreamy girl …
Anuradha Ramkumar on Jan 29, 2010
Nice poem and a very good imagination. I would like to go back to my childhood days.
Sushant94 on Jan 30, 2010
you’re still young! a young heart that beats as the flow of poems! awesome! good work!
albert1jemi on Jan 30, 2010
excellent work tnx for the share
alensmith on Jan 30, 2010
great written
SharifaMcFarlane on Jan 30, 2010
Unexpected twist at the end. lol
Precious Illusions on Jan 30, 2010
i just love the title picture and poem is beautiful!
Lady Sunshine on Jan 30, 2010
Lol.
devsir on Jan 30, 2010
How Nice I liked it
Sourav on Jan 30, 2010
Fountain of Youth! That’s a nice titie! Very well written.
giftarist on Jan 30, 2010
How lovely.
metro7 on Jan 30, 2010
ha ha nice poem.well done.
mkd1788 on Jan 30, 2010
fountain of youth…nice thought..great job
pakpro on Jan 30, 2010
Nice work… like it

I wish i could go back and correct the mistakes i did in my young age…
standingproud on Jan 30, 2010
funny you should say that.
For like ever
deep inside us ALL
we ALL
want to stay forever young.
LOVELYHONEY on Jan 30, 2010
that\\s lovely

as it speaks of things so lovely

LOVELY HHHHHHHHHHH

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Starpisces on Jan 30, 2010
nice poem/pic…
it’s so nice to be young always, but the people around us will look older and older as they did not plunged into that special fountain like we did earlier, the best is all plung together, and be young together and that will be fun…hee hee.
bailieman on Jan 30, 2010
There are joys to getting older, one of them is being allowed to say whatever is on your mind. People excuse you because they think you are doddery.
alensmith on Jan 30, 2010
my comment for you good and well mannered written.really very very good.and thanks for ur reply also which i will find in my post.
VTech on Jan 30, 2010
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LOVELYHONEY on Jan 30, 2010
if i read it again the fountain will flourish again lively lovely poem gr88888888888888888//////888888
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alensmith on Jan 30, 2010
great thanks for sharing
AlmaG on Jan 30, 2010
There’s a fountain of youth in all of us since we all stay young at heart
Ruby Hawk on Jan 30, 2010
Oh my dear, so would we all.
Inigma on Jan 30, 2010
this was great
8Shei8 on Jan 31, 2010
Thank you all! I do not wish to live forever, just stay young…at heart
qasimdharamsy on Jan 31, 2010
Very well written…I like it..great….
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Anamika S on Jan 31, 2010
Me too!
sambhafusia on Jan 31, 2010
well written..great.
alensmith on Feb 1, 2010
nice and wonderfull
Wiggles18 on Feb 1, 2010
Very nice.
devsir on Feb 1, 2010
Nice Post
devsir on Feb 2, 2010
I like this very much. Thats why I come here again and again
xoxo on Feb 3, 2010
Very nice write. Thanks.
lillyrose on Feb 3, 2010
hey girl you are still young!!!! so no jumping in the fountain of middle age!
John Paul V on Feb 4, 2010
“to dance the night away”, really nice poem!
deep blue on Feb 6, 2010
Don’t settle for anything less. I believe life itself is a fountain of eternity and we just don our personality like we dress up on different clothes everyday. You don’t want to be on the same clothes for a long time don’t you, kabayan? Certainly we have to bathe and dress anew.
drelayaraja on Feb 7, 2010
Wonderful write.. Enjoyed the youth in your poem.
ISHAN on Feb 10, 2010
nice one..!!
swatilohani on Feb 23, 2010
well penned
yes me on Mar 16, 2010
He he he …. I liked that ha ha ha.
cheers
T. S. GARP on Mar 17, 2010
Ahh, ’tis good to drink a bit of the youthfulness now and again. Just where is that Fountain Youth again? I’m overdue. lol!
Sharif Ishnin on Mar 17, 2010
The ultimate dream and the beautiful rainbow in the horizon. If only we can reach it. Excellent!

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