Very nice. I like this one.

Happiness comes like a trance Loved this line a great entry

Your prose is exceptional.TX

I agree that line happiness comes in a trance, was unique. great job!

I like this, very nice.

some happiness comes by choice, we cannot forget that too.

Excellent share

Delightful write!

I agree with B Nelson we should not forget the happiness that is coming by chance.Great work.

well done…..nice share..thanks for this..

You are so right. It takes you by surprise at times.

Christine

i am entranced my friend, nice one

A short but very well written poem good stuff. LB

Well done.

Beautiful poem!

I think we make our own happiness. But great poem.

An awesome poem! Keep it up!

Very nice poem.

sweet & simple and happily meaningful..i liked this,well written..!~!

lovely one

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This is so true; thank you for sharing.

short and sweet:)

Very meaningful