Free my Soul

clay hurtubise on Jan 31, 2009

Tags: depression, Fight, fire, Happiness, laughter, old, reign, soul, time

A soul trampled by time and accidents yearns to be released.

The fire I feel is cold,
It crawls through my lonesome being.
The fire I feel is old,
It fights me, constant disagreeing.

Old, so no coals remain.
Old, so hard to reclaim.
Old, so no joy to reign.
Old, so all is mundane.

Soul imprisoned by time,
Time that has changed my soul.
Trapped by thoughts no longer mine,
Leaving little to cheer, extol.

Sweetness now a hostile flame,
Joy a bitter pill to swallow.
Bitterness has taken claim,
Once pregnant heart, now hallow.

Soul encaged by decades,
Decades of inner, declining condition.
Laughter, kindness, left with parade,
Soul needs transfusion, soul magician.

Free my soul,
Free my soul.
Let me once more reign,
Reign over myself,
Reign over and over again.

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Maria Blazz on Jan 31, 2009
Free that soul, please! This poem is so intense.
nutuba on Jan 31, 2009
Beautiful poem! Sharing from the heart, writing from the soul … it’s so smooth and so open. Great job.
nobert soloria bermosa on Jan 31, 2009
powerful!
MJPatrick on Jan 31, 2009
Well expressed and powerful!
AC Hamilton III on Jan 31, 2009
Really awesome, profound dipped in reality. Hey everyone this guy has a great sense of humor too! Check out his piece called Cow Farts, Inc. Lol

AC
Darren Goad on Jan 31, 2009
Good stuff. A bit eerie after the just watching a horror film too.
Gayle Hamilton on Jan 31, 2009
Very strong and powerful thoughts, I believe he will….Free
You!…So hold on cause when the Lord moves….HE MOVES!
Betty Carew on Jan 31, 2009
A very deep poem. very nicely done.
Ruby Hawk on Jan 31, 2009
It happens to us over and over in life. You have to reinvent yourself and travel on. Eloquently expressed.
Debra. on Jan 31, 2009
A very deep and meaningful write. Sometimes we just lose our way.

Very nice write, Clay.
Glynis Smy on Feb 1, 2009
Very powerful words. I enjoyed this, thanks.
Lostash on Feb 1, 2009
Yes, sometimes my own coals are in need of a little stoking, and this piece did that.
Clay Hurtubise on Feb 1, 2009
Thanks guys. This is why Triond is so nice: a cyber-family!
Clay
BC Doan on Feb 2, 2009
I had this feeling from time to time..beautifully expressed!
S Air on Feb 5, 2009
Wow….very intense. Really liked it.
Liane Schmidt on Feb 7, 2009
Beautiful and aching – good work*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
nutuba on Feb 7, 2009
“… once pregnant heart not hallow …” Wow this is good stuff Clay. What an intense poem! Nicely done.
Jo Bingham on Feb 12, 2009
Powerful. I agree with nutuba that line was my favorite and really captures the reader.
triondmobile on Feb 12, 2009
Very nice.
SJ Dickens on Feb 20, 2009
Wonderful piece of poetry.
ARtistic and expressive.
Shalom.

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