Free Your Mind

JerseyXhales Art on Sep 21, 2009

Tags: art, artwork, daydreaming, Dreams, free, Life, mind, relief, sleep, Thoughts, work

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A poem.

Your sitting here all alone

The sun seeps through,

And then you let go

You drift away

Inside your mind

An amazing place,

One of a kind

It gives relief,

And it passes time

Your deepest thoughts

You come to find

Then out they come

All are free

A work of art

For everyone to see.

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Comments (8)

Sourav on Sep 21, 2009
Very rhythmic and nicely written.
Shawn O on Sep 21, 2009
Keep creating those works of art. Wonderful poem.
chantell on Sep 21, 2009
That was a beautiful Poem. Thanks I really Liked it
tim windisch on Sep 21, 2009
Nice work Dena!
cardy on Sep 21, 2009
Lovely work from you really lovely!!
Mystify on Sep 21, 2009
Truly a wonderful piece!!Excellent flow to your wording and the meaning was fab!I think this is my favorite by you so far!
Atanacio on Sep 21, 2009
10/10 my friend
Jane Jane on Sep 22, 2009
great poem. i like it being positive and inspiring.

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