Allegory.

Freedom paves the way for me to walk in, after he rest I’ll start working. When both of our works are finally done, freedom will still be the one. he’ll raise his hand than I’ll begin to run, I’ll run to the places for joy and fun. I’ll talk to them and pass off the fruits of what I’ve done, then walk back home to freedom with peace, my son. And enjoy a feast with all of us, each one, having a relationship that can’t be beat by any, anything or anyone. Because freedom is my father and peace is my son, together as we find higher and tell him we have come. We’ll work in his store until our job is done. As freedom and I keep a steady relationship with pace, we’ll grow and grow stronger with my desire with faith. She’ll start pressing and pressing me on to go, with greater things and cover me when anyone, any or anything searches for low. And touch freedoms heart to give to her, so that we together will conquer and rule the world. We’ll bring peace up to meet the real time, for real time to tell him when to show his signs. What he’ll be capable of doing when he meets his faith, what he’ll have freedoms interest to pave his way. The sign will tell real time to tell yet to come, then they’ll tell faith what must be done. For peace to release the gift he posses, and what peace can complete after desire takes a rest. Then peace will ask faith “is it ok for me to run?”, then faith will answer “wait, freedom said “”not to come. Because soon has to still talk to the great one, then the great one will give soon two THUMBS UP”"

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  • drelayaraja on Feb 12, 2010

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  • Snooky on Feb 12, 2010

    Had to reread this a couple of times, but finally sqooze the juce from the fruit. kinda deep but complete

  • SlinZek on Feb 13, 2010

    Thanks (Snooky) that’s the kind of comment I was hopeing for.

  • diamondpoet on Mar 5, 2010

    Interesting and well written piece. I got a little tangled at first but I removed the knots.

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