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Freedom’s Gate (Haiku)

Wrath Warbone on Jan 20, 2012
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Freedom’s Gate.

Man is prisoner

In a prison for the brain

With bars made of lies

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  • girishpuri on Jan 20, 2012

    good one

  • okkhattak on Jan 20, 2012

    good

  • LadyElena on Jan 20, 2012

    Nice Haiku.

  • avissado on Jan 20, 2012

    i like it!

  • Rosettaartist1 on Jan 20, 2012

    good

  • Wrath Warbone on Jan 20, 2012

    Thanks, all you guys up there!

  • KittyK on Jan 20, 2012

    Much to think about…deep

  • Wrath Warbone on Jan 20, 2012

    Thanks, KittyK.

  • girishpuri on Jan 21, 2012

    again here

  • sheilanewton on Jan 23, 2012

    Such an unusual theme, Terry. I felt compelled to read this and read this over and over. It has some sort of compelling spell about it. You think i’ve gone bonkers – but I mean it – really.
    It’s fantastic.

  • Wrath Warbone on Jan 23, 2012

    Thank you, everyone up there. I am glad you all saw something in it.

  • Jsqc Writer on Feb 3, 2012

    A stirring deep poem. Thanks for sharing :)

  • Dora77 on Feb 3, 2012

    .

    Prisoner,Prison,Brain,& wired with Lies…Too deep.

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Feb 14, 2012

    Interesting perspective.
    Thanks, for the share:)

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