Freestyle

Shawn O on Sep 14, 2009

Tags: freestyle, good hearted, healing, morality, natural, special, strength, subdue, suitable, trust, wealth

Just letting my style run.

I’m talking to you and myself

Forget wealth

Just worry about your health

That’s more important

than any dollar bill

I don’t take pills

I don’t trust them

Some people rush them

down their throat

to get that temporary relief

without knowing that they are a thief

in the night

stealing your body of the strength to fight

every germ and virus

You can look into my iris

to see the Midas touch

when it comes to natural healing

There’s no need for a dutch

and weed

I still get the feeling

to create something special

Ask yourself why

all popular music is sexual,

violent and drug related

It got me to a point

where I hate it

What happened to the morality?

Where are the boundaries?

Your children shouldn’t be listening to that junk

It’s not suitable

They’re trying to create a legion of punks

Don’t let them do to you

what they did to so many others

There are so many sisters and brothers

who don’t have a clue

about their plan to subdue

the good hearted

They want us dearly departed

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chantell on Sep 14, 2009
I agree but I feel like your talking to me. I get migraine headaches exedrins seems to take the the pain away.
I do deal with situations that is causing my frustratons.
I appreciate this message. I’ll take it as a lesson. Thank You.
Shamanz on Sep 15, 2009
A definite good poem. I got the same feeling and message out of this as did Chantell.

Very well written. Write on!
cardy on Sep 15, 2009
Liked this a lot thoughts are best this way.
Starpisces on Sep 15, 2009
Like this poem too!
LOVELYHONEY on Sep 15, 2009
pill you must take

to save your skin

and an unwanted PREGNANCY

be you married or single
Poetic Angel on Sep 16, 2009
This was very nice. I don’t like taking pills myself. I avoid them. I just let my headache go away on its on as with any other pain. If I’m around others and I’m hurting , they will make me take something. When you start taking pain relievers, you make yourself have to take them all the time to relieve pain. Being that I don’ take them, I’m able to go without when I am in pain.
shaneprairie on Sep 17, 2009
Ya thats tight! Keep it up spit that fire.
Diverseblogger on Sep 23, 2009
Real talk, you got it. You should really get into music.

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