Freezing Shower

Steven West on Jan 16, 2012

Tags: amusing, cold, frigid, humor, humorous, shower, witty

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Humorous poem about a very cold shower.

Cold shower,

Frigid shower,

Can’t get any heat.

Cold shower,

Icy shower,

Chattering at the teeth.

The hot dial doesn’t work at all.

My skin is turning blue.

I can’t stand it anymore.

My shower today is through.

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Comments (5)

rubysexy on Jan 16, 2012
Nice and interesting write-ups.
Ruby Hawk on Jan 16, 2012
I have had a few cold showers and they are not any fun.
Christine Ramsay on Jan 17, 2012
I hate my shower because it keeps going hot and cold so I either scald myself or freeze. Give me a nice warm bath any day. A cute poem.
Lisa Marie Mottert on Jan 17, 2012
You tell it like it is when only the cold water is working!
Thanks, for this nice little poem… cute:)
prsol46 on Jan 17, 2012
LOL, yeah, they aren’t the greatest are they!

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