Friendly advice

The words went flying above my head

If it’s only points Ur vying for,

Its okay

But like me write simpler poems instead

They will then all be read.

Good work otherwise

Soldier’s life is dangerous

We all know

How from Canada to Afghanistan he goes,

Return wills him

No one knows

Simple English I can write

Dangerous words

Give me a fright

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