Is a guy really worth a friend?

     

She sat alone at the bus stop

In the corner, tears rolling down her face

Reading a letter, weeping

I asked, “What’s wrong are you ok”

“No, I messed up” she replied

I grabbed my bag reached in to hand her Kleenex

Not to pry, she went on, went to a party

Had a few drinks, sat and talked to a young man

He leaned over and kissed her

Her best friend’s boyfriend,

Broke the rules, not realizing the consequences

A split second that can’t be taken back

Told her friend in honesty,

Word got out fast; she has lost a good friend

She sobbed, damaged a friendship she can’t repair

My heart went out to her, she realized the error

Wedged in a moment; that cost her friendship.   

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By Cynthia Aholelei (C) June 1, 2011

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  • Dreamy777 on Jun 1, 2011

    nice work cute pics

  • chandrra on Jun 2, 2011

    Good post

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  • yellow rose on Jun 2, 2011

    very cute…

  • neopisiva on Jun 2, 2011

    Good work…I still believe its a good friendship,it can be very easily,at least.

  • Martin Kloess on Jun 4, 2011

    thank you for following my work. your comment to my haikus show you to be a very possitive person, Just wanted you to know that i appreciate it all.

  • Sebastian Onciu on Jun 5, 2011

    It’s always sad to read about a friendship ending!

  • realityspeaks on Jun 5, 2011

    Excellent share.

  • Peace Poet on Jun 5, 2011

    this is a remarkable poem about sincere friendship. I like the impressive and lucid style of the poem.

  • myverse on Jun 6, 2011

    your poems actually talk.

  • GoldenAsh on Jun 15, 2011

    Very true.

    “Wedged in a moment; that cost her friendship.”

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