From London with Love

mannyrich on Mar 10, 2009

Tags: Big Ben, Hayde park, London, London Bridge, love, St. Paul Cathedral, Thames River, Westminster Abbey

A love story inspired by the wonderful city of London.

While looking at the Tower of London
you give a strong promise,
promise that you will come back
before the clock signals the Yuletide

While you are far searching for dreams
in St. Paul Cathedral, I’m busy praying…
praying for your wonder success
more wonderful than the London bridge

While strolling along the Hyde Park…
play with birds in the Regent’s park
I could recall my treasured days,
days with the grapes of my heart

While gazing the Thames river…
eager to see your smile again
As cold wind gave me an embrace
whispering what I’m waiting is near

When the choir had sung in Westminster Abbey
the Big Ben stroke to twelve
the lonely snow started to fall
covering the lights of the dark street

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Unofre Pili on Mar 10, 2009
Vivid poetic description. Thanks for the wonderful tour of London.
Lex92 on Mar 13, 2009
it makes me want to go to London Great poem
Joie Schmidt on Mar 18, 2009
So lovely…….. *

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Amsky on Mar 19, 2009
A memorable experience indeed…You seems to treasure the places that you have been. Nice attitude! I like the composition as it gives emphasis on the place and scenarios.

Amsky
Rookie Expert on Mar 20, 2009
I’ve never been to London, but know im going to promise the tower another trip
Street Smart on Mar 20, 2009
Beautiful! Reminds me of my trip there.
Mervin on Mar 20, 2009
This is a beautiful piece.
hfj on Mar 20, 2009
A very nice poem. Lot of great sites and historical landmarks in London, and you mention most of them very well in this piece. Well done.
Daryl James on Mar 20, 2009
This was really done well. very vivid and i like that you mentioned places in london. I felt like you were taking me on a tour. very well done.

keep up the good work.
suzan mehmet on Mar 20, 2009
Your view of London has been described very well. London is full of History and romance. Excellent verse. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes Suzan
Antonette Ramos on Mar 20, 2009
wow! another wonderful piece of work from you… i like it… well done, as usual….
Ruby Hawk on Mar 21, 2009
Very serene anf beautiful.
diane mccloskey on Apr 11, 2009
I like it! It communicates your appreciation of these places you’ve been! Well Done!
dave764 on Apr 21, 2009
London can be a very beautiful city, especially when you have fond memories of the most positive aspects of being there. Your poem puts me in mind of places I was pleased to visit and photograph in London, and places I still want to visit when I return there.
Merly S. Dres on May 28, 2009
Congratulations my dear bro…i’m proud of you…GOD BLESS YOU MORE…
Joje Deri on Jul 14, 2009
Congrats Pre, your such a great! Ever since we’re in Baguio i see your potentials to be a good writer. Keep up the good work!

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