Who knows what those special moments of love will blossom into.

Let’s spend this time amid sweet love’s refrain
This special time of stardust blessed delight
When this has passed who knows what will remain
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Receive this kiss to ease the pangs of pain
Then add to this these arms to hold you tight
Let’s spend this time amid sweet love’s refrain
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Was this the wish a dream hoped to obtain
This passage from desire to promised light
When this has passed who knows what will remain
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This mist soon sooths all doubt which may remain
Then comes this whisper mingled with the night
Let’s spend this time amid sweet love’s refrain
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Somewhere ahead are seasons fraught with rain
When darkness plays its tricks upon our sight
When this has passed who knows what will remain
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But here we are this moment to sustain
From this we build the bonds to make things right
Let’s spend this time amid sweet love’s refrain
When this has passed who knows what will remain

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  • qncai on Jul 31, 2012

    Good jib, like it, nice

  • Kharla Jolly on Jul 31, 2012

    This poem is pretty convincing, their love is mutual. Nice job, I liked it

  • Jswana on Jul 31, 2012

    Awesome. True love. Thanks for sharing. :)

  • girishpuri on Jul 31, 2012

    brilliant

  • smokychristine on Aug 1, 2012

    Romantic!

  • sabanawaz on Aug 1, 2012

    lovely share

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Aug 1, 2012

    Lovely poem…Thanks:)

  • Derdriu on Aug 2, 2012

    Martin, I like it!
    Your choice of one of the repetitive poetic formats is amongst my favorites, because of the emphasis and the varying interpretations from multiple visits and re-visits of the alternating two villanelle refrains.
    Respectfully, and with many thanks, Derdriu

  • Kristie Claar on Aug 2, 2012

    Excellent

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