Poem about lost loves (not mines)

From where I stood.

I wondered if you noticed I was there.

You wandered around the room

aimlessly, as though I wasn’t there..

I felt your small delicate feet.

Stomping hard on my eyes.

Unable to withstand the pain.

I too eluded you,

with this childish little game.

I stopped for a moment

and recalled what we had in the past.

I loved you, I wanted to erase

these painful memories at last.

No matter which direction I would go.

I’d smelled your scent of lilac.

Oh how I loved that fragrance so.

Maybe it’s better this way, standing here

but in separate parts of the room.

That way we don’t start ripping each other apart.

At the first sight of the full moon.

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Comments (10)
  • Linda Lori on Dec 9, 2009

    Wow! Great write! Love the pics too!

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 9, 2009

    You have expressed yourself really well with this piece. Good work.

    Christine

  • T. S. Lewis on Dec 9, 2009

    The pics were great.Very talented write

  • johnnydod on Dec 9, 2009

    very very good

  • Borneon on Dec 9, 2009

    I feel you girl. Nice.

  • Valerie Curtiss on Dec 9, 2009

    An emotional poem.

  • ashan1614 on Dec 9, 2009

    Funny how we try to pretend people never existed, isn’t it? I suppose it’s our way of dealing with the pain of loss.

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 9, 2009

    Very good poem!

  • Guy Hogan on Dec 9, 2009

    Yes, I suppose trying to forget someone is one way to deal with the pain. We’ve all done it to one degree or another.

  • ken bultman on Dec 9, 2009

    Is it cold in here? Well done.

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