Frostbite was written about the survival of small animals during winter.

The still of night has set in place.
Creatures all sleep while embraced.
Trees sway through out the night.
An owl screeches in frightened height.
The midnight’s chill
Has come and gone.
As tiny creatures awaits the suns return

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  • Will Gray on Jan 10, 2009

    Great imagery in so few words!

  • Parish Loveless on Mar 8, 2009

    I really like this piece.

  • Mona Kennedy on Mar 8, 2009

    some how I missed this one. Seeing your pirate pic …..and reading……The gentle giant awakens!!! You really do have the intellegence to becoming famous(for lack of another word) or having many best sellers. It all flows so naturally from your depths..shows that you are a tightly wrapped package that dwells among UNTIGHTLY wrapped packages and you can survive. Not easy to do! Continue to dig as you seem to be doing. The laughter and fun and loving kindness that you posess is surfacing. Forget the bs that surrounds us!!!! let it go my friend. You have it!!!!!!!!!so write it!!!spit it out ! LOL

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