Frustration

QuinMonty86 on May 27, 2009

Tags: forgiveness, frustration, heart, madonna, Men, Peace, Relationships, sadness, women

A sin, not of one’s own making, leads to suspicion and disharmony. Can it be overcome?

Frustration. Tears filling my eyes.

The words crashing on my ears:

Unable to believe we are here again.

My status has changed.

I have fallen from grace,

Never to be forgiven and restored.

It was you who left, who wanted out!

Seeking greener pastures? I still don’t know.

But because of another, a Madonna no more.

Now always searching for cracks, for flaws.

Innocent words bent and twisted into something wrong.

The pedestal rubble beneath my feet.

Frustration. My healing heart hurting again.

Sadness descends; a constant state of mind.

Will peace ever be restored?

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rajeev bhargava on May 27, 2009
very powerful words and really well emoted poem. when read, i could feel the sounds from the words in the manner in which they were formed into each verse. i really liked it alot.
Katie Marie on May 27, 2009
You tell so much in so few words. Well written.
Debra. on May 27, 2009
I really enjoy this one, Peggy. I love the emotion you display with your words. Nice piece.
Daisy Peasblossom on May 27, 2009
Well written. Makes me want to hunt the guy down and give him a punch in the nose–or a firm restraining order.
Christine Ramsay on May 27, 2009
Such a sad and poignant poem. Beautifully written.

Christine
Melissa Ryan on May 27, 2009
a well written poem. Some things I find my self asking
Kate Smedley on May 27, 2009
That is so heartbreaking, I can feel the emotion pouring out, so well written Peg, love and hugs to you hon, do hope you are OK x.
julianhw on May 27, 2009
I agree with Kate, heartbreaking
Ruby Hawk on May 27, 2009
An outpouring of emotions, and a well put together piece.
Poetic Enigma on May 27, 2009
Sad yet beautiiful poem,
Very well written and expressed!
Sheila M on May 28, 2009
Very emotional, well written piece of work
Trinket on May 29, 2009
Very nice poem peggy. I think you hit the nail on the head when you wrote “innocent words bent and twisted into something wrong” I have been there so many times. Trying to explain from my heart my true feelings. But only to have the words that I said be twisted into something that it was not. I like this poem very much.
swatilohani on Jun 2, 2009
great
S A JOHNSON on Jun 25, 2009
Very well written and such a touching write.

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