This moment…

Petals unfolding.

Stretching, yawning.

Basking in the sunshine.

Marveling at the dawn of a new day.

Wonderful, marvelous that the world should care.

Sudden wind blowing.

Tide changing on a dime.

All yesterdays belong to history.

Tomorrow has no written guarantee.

Cut down in the full flower of her youth.

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  • Tracey Parece on Oct 28, 2009

    Very nice. I wish that we could freeze time when the flowers are in bloom (literally and figuratively).

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 28, 2009

    We only have this moment so we had best make the most of it.

  • Angela Christy on Oct 28, 2009

    Beautiful. Reminds us how to appreciate time and beautify our life while we still have chance.

  • Papa Sparks on Oct 29, 2009

    Very lovely and evocative; really like the vivid imagery in this poem and the way that it flows.

  • Lady Sunshine on Oct 29, 2009

    Lovely, Shirley. The life of a blooming flower is so fleeting.

  • Jane Jane on Oct 30, 2009

    lovely flower.

  • ken bultman on Oct 30, 2009

    Very nice poem. A bit troubling.

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