A fun poem!

Big is is not better, it is best
urban sprawl
A mish mash
Splat!
A blot on society
I think not
What rot
Plop!
Enjoy the scene
Come clean
Scream!

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  • Michelle~Parker on May 8, 2007

    How can you put into words what a great writer you think someone is? You are a great writer and I feel anything I write won’t portray how much I like your work. I think I left some of my brain cells in the hospital. He He. Keep on writing and don’t forget to keep on taking those wonderful photographs too, especially of the ducks. LOL. If you can’t tell I love that duck photo! I’m still not well enough to spend much time on the computer but when I do I like to check in on what everyone is doing.

  • C A Johnson on May 10, 2007

    That was a really good poem. I really enjoyed it.

  • Meri Jeffrey on May 14, 2007

    I like this too! And I’m sure it was fun to relate your feelings about our cities in such an abstract yet very telling way! Thanks for sharing this style!

  • JNV on May 15, 2007

    I was kinda lol when i read this, i thought it was cute.

  • Michelle~Parker on May 16, 2007

    I just noticed the I like it button. How long has that been there ? I love pressing buttons. he he. No seriously though I’m pressing it because I like it!

  • Jessica Fike on May 18, 2007

    That was a Very cute and fun poem! enjoyed it.

  • Gail Nobles on May 23, 2007

    Fun poem to read.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 6, 2007

    very neatly put.

  • Liane Schmidt on Nov 25, 2007

    This was a very cute poem. Very light and playful.

    Best wishes.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

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