Funny Noises

Melissa Ryan on Jul 13, 2009

Tags: arms, Baby, cries, funny, love, motherhood, noises

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A poem.

Funny noises fill the living room as

your little body rests in sleep.

They escape from your tiny lips.

Eyes flutter and hands turn into fists.

Funny noises turn to a cry.

My arms reach out for you.

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Richoman on Jul 13, 2009
I really liked the pattern and rhythm of the poem. You use great description and the feeling is there immensely. You seem like a great, very experienced writer. I wonder if you could offer some feedback on a poem that I entered. The address is http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/With-the-Cold.866257
Thanks! Again, well done.
Melody SJAL on Jul 13, 2009
Nice flow.
Collette Edwards on Jul 13, 2009
Short, Sweet, and to the point…. Well Done!!!!
V rank on Dec 26, 2009
Where do those noises literally from? hehe… great imagination…

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