Gentle Leavings

seashell66 on May 8, 2009

Tags: friendship, ivory, love, Relationships

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A peom about the ebb and flow of relationships.

I long

In the quiet times for

The feeling of Eternal

Oneness

When two hearts

Merged

Effortlessly

Together

–A stream

To your ocean

Sand under your feet

To spread

Along your

Your winsome path

Your effortless wandering

Stilled like ivory statues

At the moment’s pinnacle

Of gentle leavings

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Comments (6)

Joie Schmidt on May 8, 2009
Soft, lovely, like the gentle ebb and flow of the ocean\’s tide*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Christine Ramsay on May 9, 2009
That is such a beautiful poem. Great work.

Christine
kate smedley on May 9, 2009
I love your poems, this is very gently and beautifully written.
ladybaby on May 9, 2009
Very romantic.
Fresh Writing on May 9, 2009
Very nice! Very gentle and relaxing…excellent poem.

-Fresh Writing
Virginia Wolfe on Jun 1, 2009
very nice. i like this one a lot. short and beautiful.

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